Great start!
I'm not a great animator either (my submission was Run!!!) i can see you put thought and effort into your video, you did great for your first submission, i hope to see more from you!
Reviews for "Star Wars: Coming Soon"
silentmike86 responds:
thanks glad you liked it
best movie ever
best movie ever
IM MARKING YOU 1 POINT
BECAUSE YOU USED THE WORD PARODY I HATE THAT WORD BUT EXCELLENT DRAWINGS AND OKAY ANIMATION AND GREAT WORK PIECING THIS WITH THE TEASER!
silentmike86 responds:
Yeah I didn't actually think of a title until I did the graphic, but I might change it to something else when I have finished the project.
Thanks, keeping it like the teaser was important to me, it made it a bit harder, allot of the jokes had to be crammed into a couple of seconds, but it turned out ok.
Yoda and Wile E. Coyote are awesome
You may remember my other review that I submitted for your other flash and well, you still amaze me. It's complete rndomness like that that makes me proud. Seeing as how you say it was... I believe you said it was the first flash you made I won't complain much because it is suspected that the first version isn't exactly the best. I wasn't as confused as last time and I sorta agree with the review behind mine... Jar Jar should die. But, when I was younger I actually thaught that Jar Jar was the best star wars character. That being said well done and make even more flashes!
silentmike86 responds:
ah yes I remember :)
yeah its still being scripted, basically what happened, I wanted to animate more then write, so to get it out of my system I made the Transformers one, so I got a bit side tracked lol, but to my amazement it did so well it made the front page, which very was cool
But now I’m goanna keep writing this till its done, and as for jar jar I don't actually know if he will make it into the actual story, but I do have plans for extras to go with the 3 instalments, and jar jar will probably pop up in one of those.
Anyway nice hearing from you again, I’m glad you checked this one out as well, and glad liked it.
Thanks for the review :)
very good
The drawings and the overall graphics are well done. Could use a bit of polish but you're on the right track.
Good style you are developing. If this is your first, you are doing quite well. Keep at it.
The sound was hard to understand in some parts and a bit out of sync at times. Nothing serious, just noticable.
Not to much violence here. Don't think it was meant to be violent anyway. :)
I consider alot of things in 'interactivity' from authors comments to the replay button and this was pretty good interaction for a movie. Nice preloader, {the NG preloader always work good here} and the status bar could be seen. Nice logo for yourself in the opening credits. You'll find that the better the logo looks, the better the score. And you added a replay button as opposed to loops. That good. A quality button and scene selector is all thats missing.
Very good humor. Well done jokes for someone who wanted to spend more time drawing. The scene with Wylie and R2D2 is great.
I can tell you spent alot of time with this and I really like it. I look forward to seeing more from you. :)
silentmike86 responds:
thanks, glad you liked it
yea this was my first cartoon so for the most part i didn't really know what i was doing (hence the odd sound and weird mouths), now that i'm working on the actal movie everything is pretty clear, learned allot while doing this and Transformers megs and unicron
Btw the real thing is coming very soon, its gonna be a 4 part story with each part split into 2 acts, I have currently made act 1 and am now working on act 2, once both acts are done i will submit it to NG (Most likely this month), Scene selection and menu included :)
i'm glad someone noticed my logo, it features the charaters that i am devoloping into an orignal cartoon that i hope to begin working on once i've finished star wars, but thats gonna be a while yet.