I don't like it.
It's beautifully made, but for some reason I don't like it, sorry.
If somebody played this to me I'd guess straight away you made it, with or without LadyArsenic's vocal input. I think it might be the blend of sound, it seems thick but not strong. I don't know much to anything though. I really wish I could put my finger on it. Either way, it's certainly a well considered, arranged and executed piece.