Pretty cool for your first time.
When Full_Metal_Samurai lock speaks though you should definately have him move his lock around less. Otherwise that was pretty good.
Reviews for "My Debut"
pretty cool, dude!
omg, for your first flash ever, that was some awesome animation! it kinda felt a lot like AntiClockClock's work for some reason, most likely from all the computerized voices. next time, try and use voiceovers from REAL people. other than that, keep it up!
hmmmm
So its the new clock crew lock legin looks good good graphics hope to see more lock legin guys or whatever you guys call yourself
wow, that was good, great music too
Really good for your first
You have a chance of getting into my faves
Keep up the exellent work
_-_Kevin_-_
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It used to be very common back in olden days to have up and coming locks and clocks make introductions describing them in a short and entertaining. Hopefully, you will help jumpstart some noobs into making more flash. So anways, the look of your character is nice, a good use of color, it meshes well with the already existing Spitfire Lock. the backgrounds for the most part are all equally as well done, with my personal favorite at the end of the credits, a sort of easter egg if you will. The voices were the basic computer voices, and at a few moments, they broke up a little bit. Other than that, this was a fun start to a neat character.
Ryan