nice
that's an asome 1st try make it longer and it would be asome but that god damn compyer vocie is getting old
Reviews for "My Debut"
Not bad...
It wasn't bad. Your characters are very well drawn. But I never really liked the whole clock crew, lock legin thing. I also dont't like the computer voices. So you should keep the graphics but lose the computer voices. :)
But Why???
your a good artist why would you join the lock liegion or the clocks for that matter?? anyway the animation was crisp but I would have liked to see the drunken rampage
wtf
i am so sick and tired of that computer voice that everyone uses that i was tempted to blam on site. but no, i watched it all and by the end i still wanted to. work harder on the next one cause theres talent that you completly wasted there.
nice
this is really good for a first submission, a nice change from all the CRAP i usually have to review. Fianlly, a noob who actually puts effort into his flashes. If more people tried like you, then newgrounds would be a better place. Thanks for not being a smacktard.