Reviews for Amatuer Invisibility: 2

[Deboche]

Unoriginal

I could see there was a lot of effort put into these flashes but come on...

A stick fight - seen hundreds of them, dont like them much

A guy who is depressed and cant kill himself - boring.....

Another guy who is depressed but kills himself - not the first or the hundreth videoclip I've seen with a guy killing himself

A DBZ like fight? I'm sure it was a LOT of hard work but I just thought it was boring, sorry

I did like the great lip synch in the song and I was originally enjoying Jstozak's work (the guy who thought he was ugly) but it turned out to be just like many other I've seen...

[JParadox]

Well well.

In all honesty the only one I REALLY liked was TESMs, I saw it being developed from front to end and it was amazing. Let me analize.

RazorJam- I liked the smoothness, but it's the same thing you always do. Sticks and lines. Too un-original for my taste, and you probably could have put more effort in. 5.3/10

Jstozak- Clear message, pretty good animation, but really rough on the edges. Other than that, the shattered glass could have been FBF'd to look great. Your work is admirable and excells in clarity. Good job. 8.2/10

NeverHood- It's good to see that you put some time into it, however, it's very sub-par, verging on amature... but not entirely there. The tweened lip-synching was also a turn off, along with the consistent tweens. I do applaud you on terms with the song, you synched it really nicely. Still... The artwork was sketchy (VERY) and not entirely to my liking. Anyways, goodjob. 6.5/10

TESM- Don't misjudge yourself, this was superb by all standards. I know how much of a struggle it is to FBF that much work. So many things to say... Well, first of all, The timely expressions and animation, EVERYTHING you did syanch beautifully. The action and everything was just amazing... Just remember, "Teh Un-PROPOR Anatomy!!!1" haha, good times.

Peace, looking forward to seeing more work from all of you!

-JP

[Krayzd-Wolvf]

Nice Job

It was average. Good job!

[TESM]

Little pissed...

such technical errors are so bad that i'm disgusted. for the ammount of work i put forth in my movie for it not to be shown just pisses me off to no end. Ruined my day. Razor, u need to get the hell over here and put my movie up!

the rest is very interesting, and Jz's was the best by far (although i think mine could contend)....

STILL: It sucks over 1000 people have seen this movie, but haven't seen mine, which is just hurtful in more ways than one. I'm really pissed razor. fix this shit quick ok? I think my movie is well worth watching, but ur not helping me out... very unprofessional.. and disapointing that all my work is almost for nothing.
thanks.

hurry up and get my stuff on.

[Five-Iron]

Need to fix this...

Hey! You need to fix this! Get TESM's button working and give me some credit! My alias is "Drew Matson", that might be why...

I gave it a 5 because I saw Jszostak's animation and it was awsome! I gotta try out that style he did. I enjoy the mirror scene the most.

TESM- Sorry your button hasn't been fixed yet.

RazorJam- I liked yours, it isn't anything different from what you did last time, but I really did enjoy watching it.