Reviews for Amatuer Invisibility: 2

[BlackDevilX]

Alrighty Then Im going to give each one a review

RazorJam: Some pretty nice FBF animation going on there! Even had stick men in there. Good job to you

Jszostak: I cant explain this flash.....It was just so....messed up......anyways it was decent tho,

NHD: This was a nice lil flash with some sadness and depressing moments in it. I hop it didnt happen to you.

TESM: Heh so this is what you was working on! I have read some of the reviews before mines and it seems Im not the ONLY one who feels the same way about your attitude and jusgement..Dude What is with you drawing nude guys and all? This review from Omnilurk explains it all.

"Tesm, Tesm, Tesm! You need to desperately work on proportions! The heads of your characters are fine about half the time and huge the other half. I know you think your art is perfect but sorry buddy its not. No disrespect but honestly work on your attitude. Animation wise your movie was fluid but for the most part there was too much pausing between action and not enough fluidity if that makes sense. The others had constant motion and yours had too many dramatic pauses between the fight."

Im sorry to say this dude but yea he pretty much pinpointed exactly how you act. You seem to take little advice from people and seemingly always criticizing others...work on that before you work on your flash skill..remember your one user. Disrespect other user on this site and they wont take a liking to you.

Overall: A pretty Damn Sad and depressing flash movie. I think you all could do better in it. Try harder and strive to improve yourselfs

3/5
7/10
-BlackDevilX

[TheDragon]

It was ok.

Razorjam yours wasnt about anything. The animation was cool, but you need to do somehing to make yours mesh with the others.
Jszostak yours was good but the characters animation could have been a better. The background art was fucking awesome. The song was shit hot too.
neverhooddrew, not bad but the lip synching wasn't great. Kind of boring. I didn't like the song either, but thats just me.
Tesm, your animation was alright but like the last guy said you REALLY need to work on the proportions. For fucks sake, in some parts you put the crotch where the bellybutton should be. Get soem books, look at yourself in the mirror or something. You have talent but your wasting it if what the last guy said is true about you being too arrogant to take advice. Couldve used some colour too.

Overall, not bad but not great. next time maybe you should work on a theme for you all to go from. They were all over the place.

[ChaosEnthusiast]

Man, wasnt as good as the last one..

I liked neverhooddrew's the best, Lip synching sucked i liked the art, the animation was fluid and i enjoyed it alot. Jszostak's was alright im sorry i didnt finish it cuz i hated the art but it went smoothly and i liked the atmosphere. Razor jam i liked yours better than your last one. Your animating abilities are pretty good, but still stick figures and random things are not that eye catching and entertaining to watch, I would recomend taking art classes if your unconfident about your work, but if your not then go for actual pictures and such. Tesm had this conversation before and you know what i hate about yours but i'll tell the audience so they can read this before watching the movie. Tesm, Tesm, Tesm! You need to desperately work on proportions! The heads of your characters are fine about half the time and huge the other half. I know you think your art is perfect but sorry buddy its not. No disrespect but honestly work on your attitude. Animation wise your movie was fluid but for the most part there was too much pausing between action and not enough fluidity if that makes sense. The others had constant motion and yours had too many dramatic pauses between the fight.

[CKF]

nice stuff

i really really liked Jszostak's and neverhooddrew's the others werent too great

[DropGlocK]

sucks...

one of the worse collabs IMO, nothing can be better than Anitomica or Luis's time trials! Ohh and dont forget Simple Line 7 :)