Interesting short
Well, it's certainly something I didn't really expect to start with. I think that your animating style is a very nice, smooth one, where you've concentrated on the simplicity of the art and have left yourself with not a lot of work to do with the manipulation.
The thing that I would certainly change about it is to make the toon longer than the credits, as it doesn't seem to work very well with the credits being almost 3 times longer than the actual piece. Maybe come up with something else from the chicken's point of view - giving one of the females a gift of an old lady's eye, for example? Maybe this wouldn't work, as the chicken should be female, but that can always be worked on.
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