Hehe
It was funny, but I think you have some sizing issues. Also, please animate the violent part:-)
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ForNoReason responds:
Sizeing issues fixed.... I was a idiot to think people would understand! I wish they would just love me for who I am!
=)
That was great. :D
Made my day. ;)
ForNoReason responds:
well then that makes mine...
Hahahah
Well done, that was a pretty good short. Your movement using tweening is also good, keep that up. But yeah, it's worth watching for a quick laugh! Well done! You captured the scene well, it was really slow and stuff. Nice background too!
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ForNoReason responds:
Thank you :)
I liked it
I liked the art alot and the sound you put in it gave it just the atmosphere I think you wanted. It was funny although, as was your other chicken and old lady flash, the concept was quite reminiscent of a Monty Python animation. But I much preferred this one. You made it longer and better with things like seeing the chicken and the old lady's skeleton. Nice one, keep it up.
ForNoReason responds:
Yeah I liked how this one came out better as well. I think it holds better to the original script I wrote, but I loved seeing how the two artists had two completely different interpretations of the story. I would love to do more with this, and ANY, of my stories but yeah. Thanks for the review!
Good animation.
Animation/Graphics - The animation and graphics were very good. Looks like you are pretty good at drawing. The animation was smooth and everything seemed perfectly fine.
Story/Content - Very short.. I don't know if it makes a great flash all by itself, but what you had was alright. I really didn't find anything too funny about the content or the story of the flash though. That's why I think you could have built up to it and made it a bit longer. Maybe having here take eggs from the chicken, feed it, etc... For maybe a day or two and then have the chicken just kill her randomly. Perhaps it would have been a little bit harder to predict and would surprise the audience more.
Credits - The credits get a little section by themselves this time around. :D Ha, they were by far the best part in terms of humor in the entire flash. So to anyone who may be reading my review, WATCH THE CREDITS. They are good.
Audio - Ha, this is a part that I found funny. I liked the voice of the woman and the voice/music that you used during the credits. The music and sound effects that you used during the flash part itself was also pretty good.
Overall - The credits make the submission, but the animation itself is done very well.
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ForNoReason responds:
Yeah, I wrote this script when I was just starting to write seriously. I am curious on how it is so predictable, Ive heard that a lot about this flash lol. I was thinking about rewriting the story a little and maybe having a 4 year anniversary of the flash or something. I would just have to get an animator again lol. Maybe "Precious Little Chicken REDUX!" I dont know. Anyway thanks for your comments!