Good poem!
If u could give a score for poems and stuff i would gie it a 9!
Reviews for "FOR EVERYONE"
i either give 10s or 0s so dont take it 2 serious
the background animation was great, havnt seen any of ur otha stuff but u look like u got talent
evil-eternal-destiny responds:
i wont...i think thanks
just a bunch of words that are tweened...
Yah really this is kinda boring, doesnt deserve a 3 + score that its getting now...
I didnt mind the poem, it WAS kind of hard to rad, cos of your "mistakes"...lie that last guy said..
But I aint gonna makr u down on that, I just dont see this as interesting or really fun, hell its not even sad, its just a bit boring.
Anywho, one other thing, u said "any1" instead of anyone, and when ur trying to be serious its kind of annoying.
I dotn midn it it just kinda ruined any feeling.
evil-eternal-destiny responds:
your all fun
Not bad but needs work
Not a bad piece of work, but would be better if proper grammer was used.
Such as using the word 'you' instead of 'u'.
Still an alright flash though.
I think everybody should see this one.
well done man a thought provoking and ensightful entry