Reviews for Weaponmaster Reborn 1.1

[ViolinWarrior]

*Consctructive Critisizm*

It was definatly good, but not worthy of daily first place in my oppinion. The animation was rediculously smooth, which is very rarely pulled off in NG flash cartoons. The overall artistic structure didn't do anything for me though. I found your people poorly drawn, as if you finished them as fast as you could. If you had managed to pull off more detailed drawings with this smooth animation, you would definatly be on my fav list. Also, I find music without lyrics is better for 'toons such as this one, as it doesn't distract the viewer with thoughts of Linkin Park, or whoever wrote teh song that was playing in this submission.

~VW

[M4L1C3]

Good music and good animation

but that's not linkin park it's the eXecutioners (Wayne Static plays guitar.
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[prdestroya]

How could you do this?

You should have never released this like this. This has greatness written all over it but you basically released it unfinished. Needs the sound effects, color, backround, and the characters need to talk. You do that, you get a 5/5 or a 10/10. Regardless, even if this didn't have all those thing this is still a damn good flash which is amazing. Anyway, you have the makings for something great here.

[YinLoung]

good animation

good animation but the music was pretty much off..i think u cna add a exciting MIDI or just music without voices cuz 1st of all is a fighting animatin so u should have the sounds of those guns shots or slashing and other sounds that will add mroe realistic...cuz the music was a god one a battle snes but for me its a bit off the flash.....cuz i cant really hear anything FORM the flash just pure music u gt somewhere...an di rather the stick versin uz this 1..the movement are a bit fakened...

[FernSylph]

You have the potential

I don't know about art...... maybe the drawing isn't what I liked the best but I do hope that your next submission can incorporate something that's called "humanity" inside.

No, I didn't meant I hate those hackings and slashings.... I hope the protagonist does it for a reason.