That was amazing!
That was a great movie! It was well put together. Motions weren't sloppy, and it was fast paced and well animated. I LOVED the soundtrack! Great choice. The only thing I would like is a possible voice overs (might be too much.. you might not have a mic) and color and it will be better.
I'll start on a good note...
...I cannot praise enough that you have elevated yourself from the abomination that is stick movies.
My hatred of sticks aside, this was done very well. I think if you focused less on non-stop action, you could make the animation smoother and in color. Additionally, it would give you time to add audible voices and bring the plot (i noticed a plot amongst all that rock and wanton violence) into play. If you did all that, you would have a place with the ranking champions like the Xombie and Bitey series.
Great start!
Graphics - 7/10
What you have is done very nicely. Everything is smooth, the fighting is well done. I marked you down for the lack of color, which you already addressed, and is ok. Alos for a lack of a background throughout most of the movie. Perhaps you might consider putting in a bush or tree. Or if its indoors(it seems to be) desk and chair.
Style - 8/10
The style is done very nicely. Once again everything is smooth and looks good.
Sound - 7.5/10
I dont like the song too much, but dont hate it. But the song DOES go with the movie very nicely so i cant mark you down too much.
Overall - 7/10
Once again, what you have is done very nicely. But, with a lack of a plot, lack of background, and a lack of color or details and cant give it a higher rating. Also a little marked down for repetition. The same two people through out the whole thing.
Im not trying to insult it, just pointing out what could be added. Very nicely done. itll be nice to see version 1.2
Great
Great flash film. Its always a big jump from stick to full blown animation. I can't wait to see the next one. Some constructive commentary would be to just add a little background to it. It would be cool to see some activity based on the background area.
Good music and good animation
but that's not linkin park it's the eXecutioners (Wayne Static plays guitar.
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