Geez....
another excellent first flash... i hope they get more of better flashes on NG.
I noticed you don't have any voices for the parts yet. are you getting any yet? I'd like to try and help out with it
Reviews for "blood moon ep1"
Xionico responds:
thanks =D, and yes im thinking of having voices in the 2nd chapter, but at this rate, i think they will appear in the third part, thanks for ur support, ill tell u when i need em =)
thanks and farewell =D
Is this seriously ur first flash?
Holy crap.
If My first flash had looked like that, Id be working for dreamworks right now.
Your only problems are so minor that a third party could easily fix em.
1) Your sound timing was excellent, I praise you for it, but it could have used some variety, the clash of weapons sounded like a slice, not a clang.
2) your art is admirable, but the animation is slightly repetive.
3) no voices, if this had had voices it would be one of the best flashes on newgrounds, though I understan how hard and fustratiing it can be to get good voice actors. Try your friends, Im sure they'd be honored to help you with this.
Xionico responds:
O.o well this is my first flash =D, and im proud of it XDDD, i thought it would get blammed x.x, but here it is =)
1) thanks =D, and i know that the sounds werent the best too xD
2)thanks again XD, mmmh ill try to fix that =D
3) yap, and besides i still hav to get a microphone, maby the ep2 will hav voices, but i cant say that they will right now
well thanks =D and farewell
pretty good, the sound and graphics need work...
As i mentioned, i noticed that i saw when the main character was walking, the screen seemed to freeze, that could use some fixing as it kinda messes up your flash, i like wat you've done and good choice of music and good timing of the slashing sound...overall, good job, just a few bugs that need to be fixed..
Xionico responds:
thanks for ur rewiev, mmh...yeh i knwo wot u mean, but i checked the animation like 3 times and there was anyt problem, i think i saturated it with so many symbols x.x, oh well =/
farewell
not bad
the graphics are fucking awsome, but the ff8 midis killed the flash.
if you want true kudos, find the original tracks!!!!!!
they were orchestrated for a reason, jeez.
Xionico responds:
thanks man, but about the music, well i like em XDm but ill try to find the ones u talk about,a nd sorry, i didnt know that so...XD
farewell
Great work
I was amazed at the different angles you projected. Made it look really professional. I'm looking forward to the next one. Your work reminds me of Inuyasha off of Adult Swim. My only complaint is when the blades clash, my ears heart. Maybe the sword clashing effect's volume was up too high? I don't know. I'd also like to hear voices from the characters too. That would put it over the top for me.
Xionico responds:
=D thanks, but im not professional =p, im just a dood trying toi make a good animation thats all =), and ill be glad if ppl likes it, and bout the soudns, srry i didnt had too many x.x, and bout the voices, ill see wot i can do ;D