Excellent work for your first flash
Well done for ur first flash animation!! this animation was pretty smooth and the story was sorta put well together. the sound and music which you used went well with the fighting and the scenery.
the only thing which i didnt like but i dont really mind anymore was the pre-loader, it looked a bit too childish and that put me off from the start, and some of the lines you used was too flat and is most commonly used in other fighting animations.
but overall you should be very proud of this work and i hope to see more of the series.