i like it!
not the best i have ever seen but still, it comes really close! shame that you had to cut it short though...
Reviews for "D-Day WW2"
KillMoochie responds:
yeah im annoyed aswell i had to cut it short, but at least some people still like it!
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nice
good one, it was very polished and smooth. would be great with voice acting, but still an excellent piece. kickass.
KillMoochie responds:
yeah a lot of people think so, but i am 14 so it would sound screwed but thanks.
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I like it!
Good stuff all around. As a military buff, I had some issues, but I realize this wasn't supposed to be a true-to-life documentary.
First off, the opening scene was well-drawn. The one solider with the shaking arm as he died? Awesomeley rendered!
Work on your running animations. Remember, the whole body moves, not just the hip down. It's hard to do, but it def. helps to estabilsh some realism.
Your blood could use a little work. It looks more like red dots.
The part where the soldier is shooting from the corner wasn't properly drawn. it looked like the guy was holding the rifle next to his face, which is technically not a good shooting position; the recoil would knock him back, and he'd end up bullet-ridden.
I like the way you drew the Allied troops; your Germans were a little off. I don't think they wore helmets like that. It looked like they were wearing boxes on their heads.
I got a big chuckle when one of the Allied soldiers threw the grenade into the bunker and the German flew sideways.
The sound wasn't too bad, but there were times when I could tell that you were playing the same soundbyte over and over. Diversity is key. A lack of voices also took away from the movie.
Regardless, I can tell you put a lot of work into this. I'm impressed. Keep it up!
KillMoochie responds:
thanks for hte long review.
Yay
I don't need to say to much, by now you know how my responses go lol. Did like. Congrats on your first award by the way! Its good to know that what I said all that time ago about working along side other good animators has held ground.
Congrats man. If yah ever need a voicer, or any other help, you know where to find me. (I may actually start looking for outside help myself, so feel free to drop a line)
KillMoochie responds:
thank you thank you. ^_^. actually, im planning an animaion with some talking right now. if i need an extra voicer (and i probably will), ill let u know. thanks a lot, and talk to ya soon.
something was missing.....
besides the fact that all the soldiers were clones, voices would have been good. but it was a good movie, true sacrifice there at the end. good job.
KillMoochie responds:
i got real lazy in drawing all the soldiers different but atleast i learnt a lesson... thanks for the review