It was good..i aint a fan of mario but it was okay
the sound was grat...wasnt that the metal gear sound track? good work any way.
Reviews for "Super Mario: Toads Rage 6"
mchawking responds:
It was off the movie "The Rock" if you go through the reviews another helpful person listed the author. I would but it is just something I downloaded years ago and it never said. Thanks for the review!
~Nate Johnson
natenation@charter.net
cool
Overall opinion:
looking good
Contstructive criticism:
animation could use some more speed, maybe try working at a higher frame rate? Try to smoothe out the re-using of graphics a little more, it jumped out when they where suddenly both up and standing just like before.
The difference in graphic quality in your movie is a little too big.
Maybe you could use some more effects, try fading in some white flashes? Oh and animated blood splashes would be cool =P
The concept of Toad being the hero and Mario and Luigi being a pair of.. well fags, is just plain funny to me... maybe some people dont get the humor because your graphics look pretty siriouse, but fuck them dont change that your drawing style kicks ass.
Keep it up,
Marcus
mchawking responds:
Thanks Marcus... I'm working on the framerate thing.. it's more work but it definately looks better. Also about when they were both up there was another scene on the mountain in between with luigi and mario "IS HE DEAD?... NO LOOK THEY'RE MOVING" but in order to get it to stick with the music I had to take it out.
Thanks for your review man,
~Nate
interesting
a big turn around for toad but mario and luigi will always be cowards
mchawking responds:
haha right on
Very nice going
Great work man, hope you keep it up. Some suggestions are that:
1. Seems to be a pattern to the battles, One guys starts winning then gets owned... maybe you could change it up a little.
2. Toad loses, a historic event in this serious and a "pleasant" suprise in that he dosen't totally kick ass. Maybe some 2v1 or 3v1 on Nemetoad?? or Mario and luigi together fight toad??
3. Music is amazing, you worked in this movie and hopefully the good tunes keep a coming.
4. Your skills as a flash artist are visibly improving and can only wait until the next one.
5. Focus, alittle less on the "magic, aka fireballs and stuff" and more on the martial arts. The use of the styles Karate, Taekwondo, are flashy, keep it up.
mchawking responds:
thanks man, my next movie "COLD BLOODED KILLER" *Tentative title* Takes things to a new level I think.. Stay tuned!
~Nate
I like it
I found this submission a delight even though there are some things that could be cleaned up a tad I found alot of nifty things about this and that made it pretty interesting so nice job. But with all Criticisms aside there are various endeavors to look through this flash. This was a really good production, lots of great characters awsome animation and even a pretty good story to go along with it. you really make it into a story of epic portions. I Endorse this interesting flash So here in the end you have shined up the edges and made this shine with some flavor, this was a pleasure and I do hope you keep making stuff like this as it was a good effort so nice job overall.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The only way to get better at flash is to create more stuff and submit more stuff. You have proven that you can draw and that you have your own style, The onlything here would be to have some "VOICES" to go along with the convos that mario and other characters have with eachother.
~X~