That was pretty good.
I like the animation and stuff. I don't really like the plot. (dragonball z mario thingy lol wtf)
When I see a Mario flash all i want is comedy ^__^ gj though
Reviews for "Super Mario: Toads Rage 6"
mchawking responds:
well as far as this series goes plot was an afterthought... that's why we have one now by hmmm episode 6. I will try to keep them funny for you.
~Nate Johnson
Average
To Dririthlan
The music is from THE ROCK. Music written by Hans Zimmer!
mario?!?!?
Yeah the fact that you used mario character make this a little hard to take seriously. I mean you got the pseudo evil punk dude. Strangling a mushroom-head-- no wait, they're both mushroom-heads... I also think you could have added in some voices instead of text, but it's understandable that you didn't. All in all it was an OK submission, I just didn't really like what you used for subject matter.
P.S.
The guy before me is a fucking Klannie
You got the talent all right.
Well, you do a good job animating, that's for sure. What is lacking is the sounds. When someone jumps from 20 feet up in the air and lands on someone else I don't want to hear the sound of a 2 pound weight hitting the floor. All the punches sounded generic, when toads ribs broke, well... come on. Sound emphasizes the fact that an action took place, weak sound even takes away from animation, sometimes it is better to have no sound at all (as in this case were really weak punching and kicking sounds take away from the impact of the blows and make the flash seem amaturish). I also liked how you labled the secret lab "Secret Lab." If that was a joke, that was pretty damn funny. If you were just trying to convey to the viewers that that was a secret lab, there are more subtle ways of doing it... Also, this is the first of the series I watched, It would be nice if you atleast gave some info on how the timeline goes, I assume this is NO. 1 and than toads revenge NO 1 is NO 2 so on and so forth.
mchawking responds:
The secret lab was a joke thing.. Along with mario and luigi being behind a strange mountain.. Along with the turtle.. so on and so forth. I have a wierd sense of humor but some of you get it and it's great! As for sound effects I spend all my time animating and it sucks messing around trying to find sfx. I was nice enough to get a cd from a fan and those are the sfx that I use currently. Trust me, those are much better than what I had prior.
~Nate Johnson
natenation@charter.net
disappointed
i gotta say, i'm a little disappointed that this got on the front page. no audio dialogue, choppy animation, unimpressive fight scene. get some voices in there, even if it's just you and your friends, there doesn't even have to be good voice actors, just having voices improves things a lot. the fight looked more like a couple of kids in a scuffle in the street than a high-powered, hand-to-hand battle. in my opinion, you can't be too over the top with these types of fight scenes, so don't hold back on the dbz-type moves, people love special effects (or so it seems on this site).
i'm trying not to knock you too bad. i could never even come close to making any kind of flash like this, but i have watched an awful lot of them so i guess i have a decent idea about flashes.
good luck in the future
mchawking responds:
right on... I want to stay away from the dbz fireballs and stuff because of all the feedback i've gotten... But! I want to take the violence a little more over the top. I also would like voice acting and details are being worked out with some other people... It just isn't something I can really do myself.