Pretty nice!
I did enjoy watching this cartoon. Looks like some hard work, and your style was really interresting. Some voices would have been great but that is not a reason to give you a vote lower then 5.
The story was short, but nice. Not something to laugh about at the end, but still amusing. This bird must have been very young compared to their big red chocobo-like mother.
All in all, very good job.
I hope to see more from you on newgrounds soon.