Some excellent, some rather crappy...
As many have said before me, the voice is almost impossible to hear - please get that new microphone soon for your next episode. Also, the teeth scene every few seconds was rather stupid, but other than those two things, this is a total masterpiece and had a very cold, dark feeling to it like David Firth puts into all of his movies - keep it up, but get that new microphone and do something about the stupid teeth...