it was pretty good keep it up
you have the potentual to do much better. the voice was really irritating, and although not really origional, you have a good idea on what your doing. also the animation could ber better. over all change the voice, make it more clear.... the music is good but keep it lower than the voice of the character. keep at it ill be looking forward to your next flash.
Some constructive criticism,
By this point even my mother knows about Salad Fingers, which makes this concept seem all the more redundant. It seemed under animated, with only one background and very little movement from the character(s). You have a talent for creating decent looking characters, but, where David Firth is able to tap into a subconscious feeling of unease, this flash gave me a bad 'nu metal' after taste. You would be better suited to working on original concepts.
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I got borde half way through. The main character was fucking creepy looking, and if used properly, this would be pretty cool. Everything advanced too slowly, and I zoned out a few times. You should maybe make another that is more fast paced and maybe have him talk different... You know, make it a bit more interesting...
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whats the piont in making a movie when you cant understand what the hell they say!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
weird
i didnt understand what they said at all