Oh, ok
I had to listen to this a few times before I understood what he said. At least 60% of what he said anyway. You need to do something about that, most people probably don't want to listen to this twenty times before they understand it.
Reviews for "Rust#1"
"wat was tht...i think ive gone deaf"........
ok firstly the sound on tht was awful u cudnt hear any of the voices....there was no story line .......it was just boring and trying to hard to be freaky.........good character an all....with a bit.....well alot more work this cud me really good...
Could use work,
Ok, I love the characters, but without much of a storyline it's not quite as good, you just need more of a plot like SF, and way better sound. I could not understand what he said almost the whole time. Add some better backround music as well.
has potential but David Firth's a genius as this.
You optimise your sound too much. If you listen to David Firth's
stuff, you can hear his voice over very clearly which adds to the
whole atmosphere.
There is nothing in the character to bring him to life. Salad Fingers,
whilst vacant, came to life occassionally with very good effect. Your
character's eyes don't convey anything.
I like the visual quality though. I believe that if you tweek the
above aspects, it could be a good little series.
andy
not bad
really hard to understand what you are saying sometimes...