Well...
It was okay but not as funny as some of the reviews you've had! :D
The whole offensive to gays... I don't think so. It didn't say "all gays are stalkers etc." at all.
Wario just happened to be gay and Luigi has a right to be smegged off if he's getting stalked. I'm not believing for one minute that all gay guys are perfect individuals. Every sub-culture has its Undesirables.
Nice work anyway. :D