Mediocre at best
Firstly, It's 'you're' or 'you are', not 'your'.
Secondly, if you are going to rely on gay jokes for the entire duration of the plot, at least make them funny. The humor was weak and quite immature. prepubescents (anyone under 10) may find this amusing, but aside from that, it was about as funny as bowel cancer (and twice as painful to watch). Too many close ups, leave the pixels alone, they do not wish to be stretched and distorted across the whole screen, cant you hear them cry out in pain ?, the sound I actually liked and it fit well. This could of been done so much better, the pixels arent the main concern (although they are winceful at times), It's the humor. Perhaps if you developed the jokes a bit more, less immature 'fag' stuff and more thoughtful jesting and perhaps an innuendo or two.
Having said that, I thought the Pokémon part was half decent :/