Reviews for Mirror's Edge Remix =HFX=

[Liralei]

Lovely!

Thank you for the kind comment on my profile! As such, I decided to take a look at some of the things you were working on, and this immediately caught my eye because it's a track I've been fond of singing in the past few days (well, sort of singing. I have a cold). Oh, the theme gives me shivers. It's got one brilliant trance remix, which is how I first heard of it, but the original is great.

That said, while the sounds you've used in here sound kind of unpolished, the arrangement is beautiful. I think you could expand on it by removing a few layers and going on a solo instrumental for a few measures at the end of this loop, for a contemplative breakdown-- just a pause, as if allowing for a musical reverie.

Keep up the work-- it sounds like you're coming up with quite a bit :)

Phyrnna responds:

Thank you for coming to listen to my songs. Yes, this is actually rather unfinished and still a WIP. I was just writer's blocked at the time and I couldn't continue on it. And it bugged me, so I just submitted it.
As for your suggestions, I was thinking of that too. I was thinking I would take it down that road later. Maybe I'll get back into the .flp file and work it out.
I'll let you know if I ever finish this. I hope I won't disappoint you.

-HFX ^_^

[PeckaPrime]

Hey there

Good song, good game, good loop

The drum beat is nice, flute the perfect choice, also good melody with that one, but something's missing, in the background, i think a whoooosh-ing sound would be perfect, you know like a seabreeze, a gentle wind, i think that would really add some depth, also maybe a litle "softer" hihats, i think they sound too metallic (not metal as a genre, I mean as an element) - but maybe that's just me.

Anyway, you can probably just ignore me, that's just my opinion.
I hope you finish it, if you do, drop me a message please, cuz im pretty busy and I won't really spend much time on newgrounds.

It's good. I like it, cya.

Phyrnna responds:

Actually I probably won't ignore you. :P
Nice suggestions. I'll definitely take those into account whenever I try to finish this.
Now that I do have incentive to finish it. :3

[TheVirtual]

TehV

Just loving the mirror's edge piano that's in this. I saw work in this yet it was kind of short. I didn't entirely feel a angelic feeling attached to it at which it holds true to having in the original but still.

4/5
8/10

Phyrnna responds:

Yeah, I get what you mean. It's incomplete in that manner. I'll probably try to finish it though. :3

[Kaspii00]

I think it was kinda...

Mediocre. The sound's great, but I didn't quite like the "peacefullness", or the fact that it's incomplete. Overall, this could be a start to something elite and great.

7/10' 3/5

Phyrnna responds:

Well, I was kind of aiming for a peaceful sound overall. Although I may add in a more fast paced section later on.

[ArkusRamboney]

good work

I'll give it that rating for it being an unfinished piece. but really what i would do is give it a few more seconds of rising action then have it explode. What you have now is the chick overlooking the city all beautiful and stuff. so get the action scene going with some deeper more explosive drum beats and then the ending of your choice. Hope it helps for something. would you review mine? thanks!