VERY ORIGINAL.
Most of you immature fucks wouldn't know good satire unless it hit you in your pimply adolescent faces. This piece is INCREDIBLY novel. The style is very original and the satirical take on STAR WARS is ripe.
It's one of the more original plotlines with a whallop of dry humour.
he he
I take it you've seen 'orgazmo'. That's some funny shit
Good work
There was a lot of good things to like about you effort here, the main part had to be the background design of the convience store which i thought looked pretty cool. The heads that you put on top of the clerks bodies didnt make much sense to me though as i didnt know who they were. The voice clips you used from the movie were great and the salsa shark scene at the start has to be the highlight of your flash effort.
Needs more work
~~REVIEW~~
Kinda funny but needs some work, such as adding some subtiles wouldnt hurt, also seemed abit short, and i would remove the "JPEG" heads but thats just my opinion
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles and remove the jpeg heads
~~OVERALL~~
Decent but needs more work
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it's alriiiiight
it was decent, could've been funnier, still pretty funny tho. keep it up. peace out