Can you say, "Writer?"
My god are you an amazing writer! You could make MILLIONS if this was a movie!
Can you say, "Writer?"
My god are you an amazing writer! You could make MILLIONS if this was a movie!
Creative
This movie just goes to show that you don't need perfect animation to create an interesting storyline and altogether deep meaning movie. Good Job.
You're so close
Watching your movie aggravates me ;)
Look dude, I've said it before and I'll say it again. You have some really good movie ideas. Good sense of direction, good music choice, etc. But please, please please please
FIX YOUR GRAPHICS
Your graphics have barely improven since your first comet magnum episodes. Honestly, you would get 4.0+ for your movies if you could just spend more time on the drawings. Study Perspective- Drawing from one or two source points (when doing architecture) will make all the edges line up and look correct. Many times your buildings have lines that slant four different directions. Cut back on the gradients, they usually don't look good unless put on a flat surface. And lastly, keep an eye on your body proportions. Sometimes they're fine but the next instant they can look insanely out of whack
I would expect these kind of habits from a new animator, but you've been around for a couple years now. Step it up ;)
disturbed man
that was one very twisted guy
wwwwwelllllll
yeah the graphics held you back from making it truly something...but yes..good ideas, reminded me of the Hal computer from 2001: A Space Odysessy.......
nice story tho...i would have thought that people would wonder why 3/4 (didnt count) people died and he should have been showing signs of..insaneness....nobody suspected him? Him and his talking computer? Why wasnt work shut down for a couple weeks..i mean GOSH, 3 people die!...
good ideas tho =D
-HC