Wow...
That was scary as hell... That was the most disturbing thing I have ever seen on Newgrounds... Good job! Keep it up! But what EVER YOU DO... Do NOT make a sequel. Just a tip!
Wow...
That was scary as hell... That was the most disturbing thing I have ever seen on Newgrounds... Good job! Keep it up! But what EVER YOU DO... Do NOT make a sequel. Just a tip!
Surprisingly... it great!
At first i was, well... skeptical. Your animation is no where near perfect, but that can always be worked on. Although your animation was not first class, your effort was shown and you did yourself proud.
The story was messed up, warped, odd, but amazingly creative. The movie was not my cup of tea, but i enjoyed it anyhow on the most part. It was not spectactacular, the plot was not well played out, but WAS well-thought out, so it made up for it.
I advice people to read the 'Read Me' at some point it gives you alot more respect for the animator, Mark. He really explains where he is coming from and the logic behind alot of confusing things in the movie.
However, even though reading the Read Me gained respect for you and helped me enjoy the movie even more... it really should not have been there. At some point in the movie this all should have become obvious and everything should have unraveled in front of my eyes, instead of me needing to have you explain it to me.
All in all... it was good... work on your animation and work on how you express the story so that viewers do not get so confused and have to read you explaining it all to them.
One thing you do not have to work on is suspence... i was intrigued and did not want to stop it. I had to watch the whole thing.
Well done... i am going to check out some of your other work.
K. Myst Williams
Really good one
That was a good story, and a good way to tell it. There isn't much to say after all those reviews. If you like dark stuff this is a must.
Top Content
Some movies are for kicks, others to pass the time, but this flash had real content to it. The plot was involving, the movie was long enough to be entertaining, and the ending had the perfect creepy overtone that has people shutting off their monitors at night. All around, good work--keep 'em coming.
this is great man
although the graphic sucked a bit;the story was just awesome!! I liked the dark tale it was very original.
overall u did a great job;take care.