it was alright
that was pretty cool i guess
Reviews for ""Straight Razor""
vandal1989 responds:
thx i guess
Not a bad effort.
This was fairly well done movie, with a few spots that could be touched up on. The art was pretty decent, but it was inconsistent with it seeming like you went from one level of detail to another at times. Another thing I noticed is that the character sizes do not seem to stay relative, and expecially during the fighting, get a little skewed. Animation was fair, but seemed a little jumpy sometimes. Honestly, tweening can do you better to make it seem smoother in places than FbF will. The soundtrack fit well, but cut off abruptly for the credits. Something I also noticed was that for a short period, there was a gray dot in the middle of the screen the looked out of place. Style-wise, we've all seen Matrix-type things with dodging bullets and whatnot before - maybe something different next time, eh? ;) Also, for the speech bubbles, I would recommend just taking out the section of the circle inbetween where the two points touch, if you know what I mean. Easy to do and looks tons better.
Overall an average movie, but a good effort. Keep working on it :)
vandal1989 responds:
lol I couldn't get rid of that dot no matter what. And as for the sizes getting larger and smaller, that was to show the camera zooming in and out, but I guess that wasn't working for ya. And I don't think the matrix ever had a scene like mine. And yeah, ur right, tweening looks smoother but also it looks stupid if not used right. I couldnt find out how to tween things to make them look good so I just went FbF. Anyways, thx for your critic review, I'll be sure to take ur advice into consideration when designing my next flash.
Was good...but...
The animation was a lil crude and That system of a down track ruined the movie...i would have stuck with the original track...but yeah thats just me...im 50/50 on this i dunno if it will or wont survive...good luck
vandal1989 responds:
dude it survived with flying colors. Look at all the other crap that passes then say this one wont lol. Naw, ur right about some things, I started rushing just to get it done near the end.
cool
nice movie.
if this one here is only your second flash, you got some major potential on NG. keep making more and work hard and you'll have a hit on here and possibly a couple awards too.
vandal1989 responds:
heh thx a lot man.
Good work
Yes I think that is quite worthy of being in the portal, It was kind of cut short though. keep up the good work :)
vandal1989 responds:
lol yeah, it is kinda short. But for such a nice review u sure do give a low score lol naw just kidding man.