Good work
Yes I think that is quite worthy of being in the portal, It was kind of cut short though. keep up the good work :)
Reviews for ""Straight Razor""
vandal1989 responds:
lol yeah, it is kinda short. But for such a nice review u sure do give a low score lol naw just kidding man.
Not a bad effort.
This was fairly well done movie, with a few spots that could be touched up on. The art was pretty decent, but it was inconsistent with it seeming like you went from one level of detail to another at times. Another thing I noticed is that the character sizes do not seem to stay relative, and expecially during the fighting, get a little skewed. Animation was fair, but seemed a little jumpy sometimes. Honestly, tweening can do you better to make it seem smoother in places than FbF will. The soundtrack fit well, but cut off abruptly for the credits. Something I also noticed was that for a short period, there was a gray dot in the middle of the screen the looked out of place. Style-wise, we've all seen Matrix-type things with dodging bullets and whatnot before - maybe something different next time, eh? ;) Also, for the speech bubbles, I would recommend just taking out the section of the circle inbetween where the two points touch, if you know what I mean. Easy to do and looks tons better.
Overall an average movie, but a good effort. Keep working on it :)
vandal1989 responds:
lol I couldn't get rid of that dot no matter what. And as for the sizes getting larger and smaller, that was to show the camera zooming in and out, but I guess that wasn't working for ya. And I don't think the matrix ever had a scene like mine. And yeah, ur right, tweening looks smoother but also it looks stupid if not used right. I couldnt find out how to tween things to make them look good so I just went FbF. Anyways, thx for your critic review, I'll be sure to take ur advice into consideration when designing my next flash.
Now this I liked
Good job, very obvious you put work into it. Good animation along with art skill, a mix you don't see too often. Kinda short, thinking about adding more to it? Could make for an interesting series.
vandal1989 responds:
yep this guy already has a story, but I decided to shy away from the storyline and keep this flash action based.
That was good
I liked the graphics and everything and the sound too. you could have worked on the storyline a bit though. still good anyways.
vandal1989 responds:
yeah there wasn't any real storyline to this just action. But I thought that's what ngers liked so I said whatever.
i cant belive it
very well done, add some storyline, better graphics, a little bit longer, and this would be perfect.
vandal1989 responds:
thx man, I'll work on that for next time.