Reviews for Disintegrate

[VidGameDude]

"This story didnt have a happy ending..."

"The hero doesn't walk away into the horizon triumphant and confident in his successive one man army go notion bad arse kill all feel good attitude, no instead i die here."

"Sure fighting through all of NeoPrak's rag tag hired gun mercs, genocidal sociopathic cultists, murderous genestructured hypersapien experiments, and snooty privateer security rent a cop military felt like an accomplishment...but was it worth having to find out that it was my very own flesh has betrayed me?"

"On the other side of a pane glasgow window, across an atrium of the golden laced porcelain marble mold columns, and spatial depth ridden tiles all neatly placed upon a white staircase aperture stood my fellow comrade."

"He looked at me, and as i did to him. I knew that he had sold our race to this corporation in exchange for their godly acceptance. Above him sat a row of nine NeoPrak, thrones built from obsidian and the bones of our people."

"He said softly, that there was no need for an already understandable explanation as i nodded in grave disappointment."

The Visage Stood up from the middle throne and spoke in plain english.
"A thread of hope can only last as long as the sheers of despair wishes"

"And just like that, i felt my body turn to ash and dust, taking one hard look at my former fellow brother and then...the end"

Rhunyc responds:

Wow, intense story, great though. It's awesome that my art inspired something cool like this. :) Thanks for sharing!

[The-Last-Guardian]

Creative

The terror of nuclear of war.
The entrance onto the battlefield marks the beginning of a great sin. The minute you arm yourself and enter the war-field, you are a murderer. He may have a family or an innocent life elsewhere. That does not change the fact.
The entire work is a saga.
Weaved into this very explosion is the story of a life.
Everything in this work is well placed. The blue background presents a aura that is not sorrowful, but melancholy. The entirety of horror and the beauty of steel machines is depicted in those thousand pixels.
It is a monumentous memorial.
An elegant success.
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The use of the blue is great. The fact that he is wearing a mask hides his emotions. What is he? Is he mournful, hating the very country he fights for? Is he zealous, blind to the ambitions of a overlord? We will never know. I that we shall remember is those blank blue frames covering his eyes.
The man in that suit could me anyone.
You, me, them, anyone.
The minute we enter war, we lose all innocence and righteousness.
That alone, is the greatest part of the work.
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"Forgive me father,
I have tainted our blood,
And forsaken my children.
The world will scream,
For my failure is the greatest."

[Murtiahg]

"The ranger lowered his weapon as he approached the living mass. He watched it breathe but make no move to attack him. Perhaps it was too large to move, but it watched him with a series of sentient eyes. For a moment the ranger wondered how the thing had grown so big, but then he saw what it was attached to. It was one of the bombs that had made the world as it was. A bomb of radiation and fire. The creature cackled and compressed itself. The bomb exploded, and the ranger's body began to disintegrate instantaneously."
A very good work! Keep it up!

[georgiagalaxy]

Very cool :)