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Reviews for "EgoCity Chap III"

Amazing!!!

WOW!!! The layout at the first, the DVD style thing along was amazing!!! This is three months of work paid off dude! cuz i garuntee this is making it in the top 50, no prob, and i bet its making frontpage to!! the graphics were unbeleaiable, and animation was aswome, the voice acting fit everyone perfect, and it was fast and action packed!!! this is great!! keep up the aswome work!, and by the way, i was 200th voter!!! i saved it!

wow

this was a excellent wait thats not right i mean FREAKIN AWESOME FLASH IT WAS INCREDIBLE. you are defineitly gonna get front page man. That last fight scene almost sumed up to Dragon Ball Z if not better. I loved it can't wait till the next.

Needs some work, but mostly great!

First off, let me say that this flash was amazing. I really enjoyed it. Now, onto the constructive criticism...

Plot... there was a LOT of plot here, but I think you assumed we knew too much of it at first. Perhaps putting some cut-scenes in that would help us better understand the film would have been good. Several times in this flash I found myself wondering who was who, what they were doing, and why they were doing it. Very good stuff in this one, but a more cohesive plot would have made things much better.

Voice acting... the voice acting here was rather good, but it would seem as though the same voice was used for the majority of the primary characters in this film. Perhaps you could either get more voice actors, or you could manipulate your voice or use software to manipulate your voice. It was hard to follow the story when everybody had such a similar voice.

Small screen... the canvas size for this film was incredibly small for the amount of information you were trying to convey through it. A larger view would have helped me--at least me--to better understand what was going on. It's easier to pick up on all the information when it's more spread out.

Energy colors... one thing I've noticed about a lot of interesting films is that the color of the energy varies based on who's using it and what it's being used for. You used primarilly a teal/cyan/light-blue color for all of your "energy beams," so it was near impossible to tell who was using what energy for what purpose.

Overall... this is a very good film, and I enjoyed it a bit. I hope you don't take my criticism the wrong way as many here do. I'm just voicing my opinion. Thanks for the film, and have a nice day!

wow

Wow, kewll graphics, the music is awsome,
graphics and drawing, they good, extremely good,
I like this

Amazing!!!

Amazing Flash... Terrific job... **applause**