Reviews for EgoCity Chap III

[mdinak]

great, but still not perfect

Great submission, but a few things you might wanna work on:

1) The story seemed really rushed, like you had a big story you wanted to cram into one flash. Even after viewing the other movies I still seemed kinda lost.

2) The sound was also kinda random...at some points it fit very well, it made me go "OMG, thats the perfect music for this scene", but at other points it was really distracting, and it cut over your voices alot. Also...all the voices sound incredibly similar...

[LewaTheZebraGod]

Wow

That was beautifully done. It's one of the most stylish, and smoothly animated flashes I've ever seen. But that has got to be the worst voice acting on the portal. Dude, next time give me a ring and let me help.

[MrCal]

Another Great EgoCity

This was a great I love the whole Invader Zim Meets Sonic style really cool!!

[SquidBonk]

Great effort, long time in the making shows.

You've put a great amount of time into this and that's awesome. I think your next step is to look into the basics of animation. Your sense of timing is really poor. It feels like you rushed through the whole thing. I know that's the last thing you want to hear on a review of a movie that you put 3 months of your life into but that's how I see it. Again, great effort. It doesn't hurt to make things short if it means better quality. Oh and one last thing in this if you plan to keep all the rest of your animations like this, you should look into getting a pause button as well, sometimes things happen that we have to do when watching these movies and we may miss crucial points.
Good luck

[InvaderMissy]

oink

Me did voice overing for Rachel.