Excellent Job!
I think you did an exceptional job with this! The sprites look great, the animation is smooth, your visual storytelling is excellent and you've got a well-timed pace throughout. I'm impressed!
You already know your weak spot is English (do you speak a Nordic language?) and I think it shows excellent initiative to look for help with it.
This is a slick project and I look forward to many more from you. Best of luck! Cheers!