Sorry man.
Sorry man, but i'm going to rate this with a 2, because it lacks of originality. The depressed guy who is beaten at school and jumps off a building with Linkin Park (Death to false metal) music has been done a lots of times.
Next time try to do a guy who stays strong against all the problems at the ryth of true heavy metal... that's somewhat original, at least haven't seen in a very long time.