I like it
a very good begining beat would have liked it better if that piano thing had kept going just a little toned down. Also transions really need to be smoother out the drum goes in and out kinda randomly see if you can have more build up and link the different sounds together (the drum, piano, all those other noises). look forward to the techno loop.
thank you sir
Bland.
Good use of sounds but I found the musicianship in this piece quite lacking. It was far too repetitive and what you did have lacked flavour.
yeah. but remember this a raw version. what dont you guys get?
Hmm ..
The melody is a ripoff of the start of Fade to black by metallica. Just keeps repeating. Sorry man, but i dont like this track, its boring and repetitive. I think it could be a nice track though, if you worked on changing some parts later on.
Also, take out the slow part in the start, it doesn't match the song.
i didn't rip it off. but thanks.
cool
u recorded it a bit 2 loud so u no it crackles and such
and the piano/synth is rly basic and unoriginal,
sry to b that kid, but for a months work this sucks
you're a cool kid... how can i be as cool as you?
Velocities
The piano does not sound natural. It is dull and monotnous. Try playing with the velocities, it should result in a much more better sound.
a four? its honestly worth a four?