Horrible
you rushed the lyrics towards the end. The beat was horrible. You added horrible sounds in the background. Splashes (cymbal) was way off beat. You added congo sounds that made me wanna slap you. The ending was horrible. I'm gonna go slit my wrists now.
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If I was black I would have a reason to kill you
Besides your ultra high voice, near the end there was no flow, it seems like you just added random sfx's anywhere. Try to get a better beat, then at least try to make your voice a little deeper.
Dude honestly
Listen to some real music like jazz, blues or metal (NOT RAP METAL J00 PENOR) and stop rapping.
Nearly every person has beat u in a rap battle cause theres has been funny and not try hard, and your music, did u go to the store and buy mix match dj because it sure sounds like it with all those fuckin random noises.
well in good tradition, "DJ SPIN THAT 2 SIDED PLATNUM RECORD MAJIG"
*gay rap beat*
JOO ARE TEH PENOR
JOO LET BEDN SUCK OFF JOOR WEINOR
JOO ARE A WILLEH
AND IM NOT BEING TEH SILLEH
JOO THING JOO RIDE "HARDCORE"
MOST PEOPLE IN THE GHETTO ARE POOR
BUT JOO HAVE A COM-PU-TOR
WHICH HAS TEH INTRAWEB-ZOR
STOP RAPPING AND GO GET A FREIDN
JOOR GAYZOR SO GO SUCK OFF JOSH BEDN
TEH NO RESPECT FOR JOOR WIGGER RAPPING
IM TEH HATER LEWL.
shizzut tha hell up.
Lol?
Nice little girl voice...
Damn right ur not Weedclock,Cuz crack is for fucking fags who cant afford weed,crack is a cheap nasty drug...dont feel cool for smokin' crack..
dude
get some skills. you can't rhyme very well you should practice some more on your beats to as well as your rhymes. then make a new submission.