Reviews for Edge - Part 2

[DivineSlayer]

Not bad...

Heh.. Looks like he jams the sword into his head. Sound repeating sounds very nasty. It'd be nice to have more action and less reading.

Errors/Typos:
(In beginning)
"you was pretty messed up" - you were pretty messed up
"your still quite week" - you're still quite weak
(Flash)
"seems kind of stupid if yuo ask me" - seems kind of stupid if you ask me
"Traitor" changes to "Trator" at the end of the mugging scene
Missing some capitalization and punctuation.

If you wanted help with your grammar/spelling I'd be willing to help you.

Other than all this its a nice series and I'll be waiting for the next.

Confuzzled responds:

as for spelling i dunno whats wrong, I run EVERY word though the spell checker i have so i dunno why it didnt notice, it did notice the trator thing but thats the only spelling it could come up with, i dunno if i just spelt it so wrong that it didnt know or if its spelt different where ur from (like color and colour). As for the sword I know, i didnt think about that untill half way thought the next scene so i would have had to have remade that part of the scene and it would have taken too long

[Dudethecat]

hmmm

I love your stuff and your style...I dont know why..it seems unique. 5!

Confuzzled responds:

thanx ^_^

[ZeonSoul]

Um...

Well....I was kinda bored, there are too many dialogues between characters, and very little action...

Confuzzled responds:

yeah there will b much more in part 3 sorry

[firecrackerboom088]

perdy nice

i liked it thoroughly... how long does it take you to make that? Seems like it would take a while... i guess not having voices really keeps the file size down... but it would be nicer if you could see them talking and at least have a noise or something... that took a little out of it but i still liked it.. i will be waiting for more in this series... hopefully with some more action! :P

Confuzzled responds:

the next 1 will have a battle, I AM looking for voice actors, and it took about 2 weeks but i worked on it for about 5 minutes per day so that i wouldent get annoyed and give up on it ^_^

[Jigaton]

Dude, i love your style

truly a nice atmosphere you create. the animation style and drawings are unquie and well executed. seriously nice work. If only you'd do voice overs and actuall music tracks. seriously, these would be outright awesome if you did away with the crummy sound loops and text boxes. just some advice from a fellow flash artist, do what you will. keep 'em coming- your fanbase just grew one member stronger.

Confuzzled responds:

yay! I AM looking for voice actors and i REALLY wanna fix this damn loops (DAMN YOU FLASHKIT.COM!)