well...
It was alright, but i think you could have done a lot better. Keep trying!
Reviews for "Edge - Part 2"
Confuzzled responds:
Watch Edge part 3 then, thats been imporved and Edge part 4 is going to b a LOT better (its WAY better so far and i'v only made like 10 seconds of it LOL)
something's missing
it's... good... but it's way too many still scenes with a whole lot of dialogue. put more movement in when you click on the dialogue to advance. there was just one long song playing the whole time. that gets really boring. i found myself just clicking randomly skimming the text say to myself "blah blah blah" wishing something would happen. the highest humor in the whole thing was when his summon picked up the dude and carried him. that's it. it was mildly interesting at best, there's just something missing from it. definitely more action as others have said... voices, quite possibly (alhtough some have gotten along quite well without them)... i dunno about cars, but hey whatever. it's your flash.
Confuzzled responds:
LOL I dont think I'll use cars...unless MAGIC CARS...oh wait...damn u harry potter!
Sorry about it, this 1 dissapointed me too, I have started wokr on part 3 and I'm completly remade the toon, the test will not b as drawn out and there will be more animation, i'm also looking for voice actors (this would mean no text) sorry to EVERYONE about the music i'm quite annoyed at it and I hope to have it fixed for part 3 (SORRY!)
well done
more music, more action, more cars
Confuzzled responds:
ok in part 3 there will b BETTER MUSIC, MORE ACTION, MABY VOICES, AND...cars?
\:(
there's too much fuckin talking
"oh, hi, lets talk for 50 minutes and walk around with no feet." *sigh*
Confuzzled responds:
unless u read slower than me you have a crap perseption of time mate also if u look at other toons by me u'll see thats the style -_-'
Laughing my ass off
wow all i was doing is clicking that damn thing. i didnt see any action, violence, or even anything worth seeing. I almost slept.
1.put a goddamn good song or a longer music, it was aweful lessoning to the same thing many times.
2.make it longer and put some action in it. by the was i gave u 1 for having a lil laugh on it.
MasterJedi
Confuzzled responds:
well i guess a 10 in humor is good...considering its not really a comidy...u complain abut the clicking but then give it 0 in interactivity, i understand the 0 in sound (trust me I am annoyed at Flashkit for the crappy loops) and voilence but 0 in grafics? u didnt even mention grafics in ur review