Reviews for Unhappy Ending

[ThePenIsMightier]

Meh...

Iv'e done PowerPoints with more animations than this. In fact I wouldn't be surprised if it was PowerPoint that you used. The least you could have done, was make the words last long enough so that I could read them while comprehending the meanings. It was an interesting idea, but sadly, thats all it was.

[thecomix]

lol!

the gun looked like a penis!

Burnsyman responds:

you must have a strange looking penis. im sorry.

[HuminoidTyphoonVash]

Good!

Good! Good!

[phoenix-risen]

Speechless

Powerful. Original. Noir. A damn fine piece overall, with artwork complementing sound and plotline. Excellent twist. That's all I can say.

[linkrulz]

Not bad

Voices could do wonders for this