Vomit
You give like 1 second to read all that SHIT that you wrote and when I actually DID get a chance to read it, IT SUCKED!
Reviews for "Unhappy Ending"
Burnsyman responds:
learn to read. I dont like you.
Reasonably boring short movie.
Nothing really happened at all in this movie except two people dying for some reason. The little bubbles of text that pop up disappear befroe you can read them. I have got to give this one a low 4/10!
Burnsyman responds:
U have to? fuck you.
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yeah man yeah c00l!
Well it was alrite
The animation was a little bad but I liked the whole dialogue thing going on.Did give it one of those Unhappy Ending screwed up movie sort of things.
well, the title made sence... but needed work....
definately needed work...
first of all, the animation::: it was very scarse, and as ThePenIsMightier said; i also wouldnt be suprised if you had used power point for this movie... so yeh, level of animation was very low... very low indeed.
secondly, the graphics::: well, they werent what you call good, but they werent what you would call bad... hence the 5/10 in that area. i think that you should have worked on the graphics in this movie, seeing that it was pretty much the main 'thing' in the movie... yah, graphics could have been alot more detailed and such...
3rd; the sound::: well, that was OK... (6/10)... the music was OK, went pretty well with the mood of the movie. but i think that there was only ONE sound effect in the WHOLE thing! and that was a gun shot... so i think that the movie could have had more sound effects in it...
4th; the information::: by this, i mean those little captions...; well, they didnt really give a very good description of what was going on... so i think they should have told more about the story, and why these things were happening. also, the disappeared off the screen WAAY too fast... for the most part of the movie, i didnt really know what was going on (im not the fastest of readers...)... so the captions should have stayed on the screen for alot longer. That would just enable people to take in whats going on in the movie, and really understand it.
lastly... the legnth::: was VERY short, and would have been way better if the movie was longer...
i think that you could have expanded on the plot (most definately), and made the movie alot longer... you should have introduced who the characters were, and given more information on what was going on, and WHY people were getting shot, instead of just having little captions - breifly explaining events... so yah, plot could/should have been much thicker.
So... Overall, this movie had an alright background music track, and that was about it... heh, it could have done with HEAPS more work in pretty much every department, and i think this was very far from its potential... so next time, when making a movie, try to put more effort into each aspect of the movie... it really helps it in the end.
Overall score: 4/10
(THE THUMB: DOWN)
Burnsyman responds:
you put way too much time into that review.