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Reviews for "\\\Falling In Love [Demo]///"

Eh... a couple mistakes.

At 00:27-00:31, you had a perfect epic transition, and you blew it! At 00:31, you should have come out powerful, but instead you went to a gradual increase in power, which completely destroyed the epic transition. I could note other points in the song, but your main problem is your power, because you're lacking! At 01:59, you nailed the transition, which was good. Now that I think about it, maybe one of your problems is the fact that you have too many epic transitions, and not enough power to back them up.

Now, this doesn't mean that you didn't do a good job, just that you could have done much better. This IS just a demo, so you can still correct your mistakes. I also loved the fact that the song looped, which, for this song, is awesome.

All in all, keep perfecting this song. It has the potential to be awesome, but you'll have to put in some more effort. 8/10, 4/5, and tons of support. Now go kick some butt!

Hm...

I agree with the others, that this song is sort of repetitive... but other than that, it was good! I like how it changed towards the end.

hmm

it was a good idea and all, but it sounds a bit wierd and yea, i agree with everyone else, there is no climax in this song :O u need those! lol
well keep trying and i hope ur next submition is great :D

I like :D

I agree with some of the people who said it was too repetitive and that it kept building up but i dont know, the melody feels really catchy. It's a simple song that doesnt really need more added to it.

I really dont like at 0:30 when it randomly stops then starts again with the same tune... other than that it wasnt bad, maybe some FX will make it more interesting?

hey if you have time and check out my songs I'll love you forever lol

Looking forward to the final

-M

It's medicore.

The melodies are moderate and the bass is okay, as well as the synths. A bit repetitive in general throughout the track. Maybe the use of different intruments or more variations? Well I would like the hear the vocals in this. Oh and, is this really latin by the way?

P.S. Are you Harry Potter's brother?