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Reviews for "Story of a rabbit"

omg....

I'm crying... I know I know... I'm a sissy... But really that was like a romance story... could you make something like this about a human or something? it was... depressing but I like it... You could really make the graphis less dull. But the sound was perfect and I love how it ends... make a part 2 at least.

Too long, too slow, too boring.

10 minutes is a pretty long time for any flash video. Too long really, unless it's a very good one. I know you wanted it to fit with the song, but the graphics weren't that great, and so much of it was just the same movie clips and a little bit of tweening, being shown to me for like a minute. It gets pretty boring.
And in the end, this is kind of a minor thing, but you say he's happy in his new life, but never truly happy, cause of the dead family. I kinda think with this type of thing it would be better to say he's sad about his family first, and then say, but he's happy in his new life. Seems like a pretty carefree cartoon overall, which is appropriate for a rabbit, and then you sort of end it saying "but even rabbits lives suck".

ZZZzzzzz

Good work with the cinematics, But yes, it was boring. make it shorter and keep working on your animation skills and you will do well.

Good but...

Really boring. As for C&C the legs on the rabbit seem to be "disconected" from the body. Also for a action scene like running off the clif try saving the slow-mo for when there at the edge or falling seemed like watchin snails racing to their death. Also for fixing the boring part of it, it wasn't the plot that bored me it was how long each scene took to get to the point. A possible soliution to that would be add dialogue explaining a situation or get to the action faster. Your good don't let others tell you otherwise, however you should still brush up on your skills (as should everyone regardless of how good you are).

worst ever

it was long and drawn out i want my 10 minutes back