Reviews for Story of a rabbit

[STRATERCAS]

Good but...

Really boring. As for C&C the legs on the rabbit seem to be "disconected" from the body. Also for a action scene like running off the clif try saving the slow-mo for when there at the edge or falling seemed like watchin snails racing to their death. Also for fixing the boring part of it, it wasn't the plot that bored me it was how long each scene took to get to the point. A possible soliution to that would be add dialogue explaining a situation or get to the action faster. Your good don't let others tell you otherwise, however you should still brush up on your skills (as should everyone regardless of how good you are).

[aircooledguy69]

ZZZzzzzz

Good work with the cinematics, But yes, it was boring. make it shorter and keep working on your animation skills and you will do well.

[rlbond]

Not my style

Not my style, but it looks like you worked hard. As for the reviewer before me, just because a movie isn't violent doesn't have violence doesn't mean you can be a shithead about it, and this movie DEFINATELY doesn't deserve a zero. If you're going to say that it was so bad why don't you try to make something better.

[Dancho]

DUDE fuck that

I was watchin that piece of shit for a long time Duude and there were parts when i thought this pussyass movie(like the vet scene i thought they were eating the rabbit and that was a knife and fork in his hands, and that woulda been awesome, but then i realized he was just at the vet) and then the rabbit lives happily ever after?? wtf were u thinkin, dude next time u send in a movie make it funny or something with lots of humorously pointless violence and cool morals like violence is always the answer or mass killing is always wrong but atleast u got the chance to go postal ;)! instead of making something cute and something that a suburban bitch that goes to bible studies and to church every sunday, make something that crazy violent teenagers like me would enjoy( majority of ppl on newgrounds)alright dude so now im gonna blam this and next time dude make something good and funny or just really violent(making it gothic helps alot).

[DifferentName]

Too long, too slow, too boring.

10 minutes is a pretty long time for any flash video. Too long really, unless it's a very good one. I know you wanted it to fit with the song, but the graphics weren't that great, and so much of it was just the same movie clips and a little bit of tweening, being shown to me for like a minute. It gets pretty boring.
And in the end, this is kind of a minor thing, but you say he's happy in his new life, but never truly happy, cause of the dead family. I kinda think with this type of thing it would be better to say he's sad about his family first, and then say, but he's happy in his new life. Seems like a pretty carefree cartoon overall, which is appropriate for a rabbit, and then you sort of end it saying "but even rabbits lives suck".