Pretty Good
I'd have to say that this is showing to be a promising series. The style of the storyline is new and intresting. Just a few things need touched up, like it could use to be bigger for one. After awhile the timing started to slip up, and the points made between chrono, frog, and marle went back and forth and didn't make sense a bit. The text is annoying and needs improved, voice overs would be awsome!
But your work with battles is really good. Just perk up a couple things and I can see it on the front page. Get a lil more detailed with teh story also, make sure to close all circles.