Blowed...
This movie seriously had no point and sucked... the grammar was out of line and you still have a little bit of time bugs in there. I also noticed when Magus first saw this Serge character that the color between his legs didn't match the floor. The text boxes werent all hunky dorey either might I add. One moment, it's clear and the next it's black and too small.
Maybe it's the beginner's thing but whatever.
And do NOT give me that "Well you didn't make any movies" bullshit either cause I'm sick of it.