Reviews for {Never Ending}

[mattchew420]

cool

its got some pump to it but sorta dull

Michael425 responds:

thanks.

[CardboardBox]

Its ok

Its ok :/ Ive heard worse

Michael425 responds:

thanks.

[9thOracle]

I am here to deliver thy body to thy maker...(idk)

The song is... unsual.
It seemed to have a story, but it was hard to see.
I think it may have layed in the volume levels. The main lead was a bit too loud and made everything seem out of the picture. I wished the orchestral hits were a bit more pronounced. It was also a bit repetitve even though you made a lot of instrument changes. Try to make melodies in the same key that still work with the main tune. The main tune though sounded as if it might have worked better as a secondary.

As this is your first song, I congratulate you as even though I just gave a bunch of reasons that it could be better, I still enjoyed the song.

Michael425 responds:

thanks for the advice, I'll get working on my melodies.

[Stavalya]

hmmm

ya its ok it needs more than this to be great though there is alwasy room for improvement

Michael425 responds:

yeah, I wasn't really expecting my first song to make top 30.

I'm putting more detail into all the new songs I'm making.

[n16pr]

good beginning

It was a fairly good beat but it was just that a beat. You didn't add anything other than the basics of a rythym. This is a good starting poitn but you need to add something to your music to make it unique.. something that truly stands out.

Michael425 responds:

thanks for the advice man.