This is pretty good.
It's not half bad. I could listen to it without killing myself. lol I mean that in a good way! I congratulate you on your first song! So keep it up, practice makes perfect! And I see that you are replying to EVERY review, which is good, shows that you are committed to your work are want to improve (Or you have a LOT of free time on your hands :P) The song was basic, but not boring. I enjoyed listening to this song.
Keep it going!