Again Amazing
You know littleluckylink put this on his latest flash day of the dead
Reviews for "Cyrptic Temple"
Sweet. Heres your story.
I got a story too.
As i entered a mansion i saw dismembered corpses everywhere. I got a huge chill knowing that, that scene would be stuck in my head. As i checked more places. Only to hear a strange sound. It was a little girl singing a weird song. I felt fierce but then something that made me want to leave the place happened. I entered a room with 666 scratched into all the walls and roofs and floors and tons of evil possessed pictures in it. It looked like a sad soulless little boy was moving towards me. I thought it was my mind thus giving a little hope that i havent gone crazy. I was hoping that this was a nightmare so i wouldnt have to experience this that long. But i was wrong. As i just wanted to go home i took my stuff and ran like heck to the main room only to see that the doors were gone. I felt like this was hell but i wanted to have faith of getting out of this nightmare alive. I managed to find a clock. It apparently was 4:26 am. I checked my watch and it wasnt there anymore. I remember it being 3:38 when i entered. Then i heard a sound that gave me a chill. I heard a yell of someguy being brutaly tortured, or thats what it sounded like. I saw a shadow upstairs and i followed as my stupididity made me. When i entered the room i saw a corpse whom mouth stitched shut, elbows razored and eyes gouged out. And yet, no weapons to end this living heck. I checked everywhere to find supplies or weapons. I cheered as i saw a window. I barely could see it through all the darkness. I walked toward it. I saw a man who had been peeled all around for a mili second yelling "TURN BACK!" he dissapeared and so did the window. I moaned wondering what did i do to desserver this nightmare. And no result. So i searched more and more for supplies. Nothing. Then suddenly a pitch black hallway came into my sight. I heard a bunch of undead souning screeches in it. So i didnt feel safe and brave enough to go in. I turned around to only see a dead looking doll that had been tortured. It was moving slowely towards me from what it seemed. Dolls were the least of my fears so i went and kicked it straight
in the head. I knocked it off and blood was splatting everywhere. I Was weirded out because dolls are plastic. As i got the courage to go into the hallway i ran. I was bloody mad and i wanted to escape. And i wasnt going to let a hallway of what sounded like the undead get in my way. It couldve been another illusion anyway. So i got my fist out ready to rip some heads off with all my strength. Nothing was there. I sighed in relief. I checked more rooms. A bathroom of a kid whom drowned in the bathtub. I checked the mirror only to see a dead tortured version of me in it. I checked the cabinets for weapons or anything and nothing.
As i grown tired, mad, and weary. I decided that i might as well stop looking and
Think. As the random laughs and the illusions tried to block my thinking it didnt.
I finally decided that i could hold my breath to kill myself. I got an item to squeeze. And it worked. So as i lay dead in the bathroom floor i started to see myself rot. And i woke up. I hope you enjoyed :D. I spent a while making this.
my story
A satanistic cult has taken over most of earth and my family and I are hideing at home. Most of our friends and nehbors are hideing also. All we have is at least a weeks worth of suplise.Tops. We also have a small radio. we listen to it every day hopeing that good news would show,but that hope left when we listend one day.
*crackle* Cult has taken out Australia! no sighns of local life! *crackle* The government has also fallen ann and...whos that? who the hell?! How did he get in?!
How...What are you doeing?! leave me alone!! Leave-OH LORD!! AAAGGHH!!! *craaccckkllee* Radio dies. we hide out hearing the sound of the cults above our heads we even hear a body hit the floor every now and then.Our rations are gone. We start starveing.My mother starts getting ill and I know that she will get worse due to the fact that where in our basement with the rats wich we eat in despratness.The cult goes qwiet for a few days. We deside to go to the Mildred family to check up on them and see if thier alive. When we get to the house we knoe instantly that they did not survive. Mr.Mildred's corpse was mutilated and riped apart to the point where we hardly reconized him. We found bits and pieces of Ms.Mildred scatterd acros the yard. The door is busted down and we smell a roten stench come from inside. We go in and see that the children where not lucky either they had been stabed in the hearts and one was even riped in half! We desided that we need to take thier suplise.So we did. And not to soon because the second we closed the basement doorthe sounds of the cult returned. My mother has died from her illnes. At this point my brother grabs a machete and a pistol and tells us hes going to kill the cult. My bro may be the most athletic of the group but stil I think its the worst idea ever and I try to stop him but he slams the basement door shut and he puts something over it so the cult dosent see it. For a while we hear gunshots and slashes. I get up to join him thinking he could use help when sudenly he screams. I wach as his blood drips down into the basement. My sister pukes at the sightand then thiers a sound above. the sounds of our nehbors houses being broken into. the sounds of people screaming.the sounds of children crying.the sounds of limbs being riped apart.And the sounds of bodies being stabed into. then we hear the door of our basement get pounded on. an arm bursts through but it dosent look like a human arm. then finaly the door gives way and the cult pours in. But they werent a cult. They wher demons. Every one is riped apart mercilesly as more and more come in until finaly im all thats left. I know that im all thats left. I look to my left and grab a shotgun and looked to my right and grabed the hacksaw. I knew that I might as well go down fighting. and thats hen the fun really began. >:D
tell meh wat u think plz
-erikisyourgod
Dark, creepy, and awesome. I love it. Great job!
Sounds Spooky!
It sounds realy misterious and dark.. I quite like it:)
It's not realy a song, but it would be perfect for a game or a movie!
A also like the name (Kryptic!) xD
You did a good job making this!
5/5 - 9/10
Respect,
Kryptic
punk7890 responds:
Thanks Kryptic! Hehe.