Too slow
It would be cool if it is a lot faster. You have a good idea but a lot more could happen.
The drawing of the backgrounds are nice though.
Reviews for "Calvin Carcass #1"
I also agree with peteraustin
It was pretty slow.. but I don't really have any advise to give (peteraustin and Heretcic-X did cover it). Maybe cutting the movie into scenes and adding a scene selection menu would help too. I too am going to watch episode 2 to see what happens.
Heretic-X and peteraustin got it.
I'm not gonna repeat what they said other than, simply put, this is far too slow paced.
The clean animation style and decent audio is the only thing keeping this from getting a 0 or 1.
If you do make another one, please take note of peteraustin's advice.
I agree with Heretic-X
This, although very finely drawn was very poor in the physics dept. As Heretic said - it's very slow where it should be quick & vice versa.
Maybe rather than use tweens the way you have, it will take a bit more work, you could try cutting objects into smaller sections - it'd improve the speed of the visuals which is sorely needed.
The music was well suited IF the faster motions were in effect. At the moment, it is just a little too fast for some sections and too slow for others.
The ending was terrible: A major anitclimax.
More speed and more graphic attention - head in factory AFTER seeing what's happened to the rest of the body - a good parody on the mindless trawling and gutting of fish. Possibly an opportuinty to actually say something and/or carry some kind of message that people can relate to more than a bloodless comedy corpse (who's seen a corpse without blood except on Dexter..?
To me this video says "I had a good idea, I'm glad I said there'd be three, cos the first one wasn't very good."
But I'm still gonna watch 2 and 3, cos I think you've a good idea too. Just not presented in the best way.
You almost have it.
haha
Its like Weekend at Bernies... minus 2 douchebags.