It was nice...
Sound
This is very promising indeed. I think you should have added sound... at least some waves , or wooshing of the wind... some background music.. it could have been better...
Graphics/style
I like the way the drew this and it was nice but try to smoothen some lines more.. But in overal the coloring was very nice.
Humor
I was amused with some of sora's action and the faces he had so i had to make humor a '2'
Overal
I see great potential in this it is very much like the manga. please continue.. ( but i doubt it will happen like 70% of any good KH flash where discontinued) just take your time in this and you'll see that this could be very great! maybe even frontpage material.
I hope to see more soon.
~YJ