was good,but had a few flaws....
okay,to the guy below me,bno that looked nothing like the manga versions,but close enough. okay,now,to point out the very FEW
problems you had. obviously:no sound. and no voices.
second,i hated how the clouds were done. 3rd. the character
art was great,but still,always could use some improvement,eh?
maybe some more shading,make it more detailed? and make the lines just a bit straighter,sure,the art was great,but some of
the lines on the characters seemed a lil wobbly,like,not straight.
other than that,i see very few problems with this.
OH! anmd it was much too short...but stilll good.